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Lie to me and whisper sweet nothings.
Keep on!  Brave and pathetic soldier of love.
Battle through my heart~{!/~}s jungle.
Go ahead!  Keep on.
I pity you.  You amuse me
not.  Drag your saber through the mire
if you please.  Your utter selflessness
touches me
not.
Say something to me.
Discard clich~{(&~}s and say something brilliant, not like
the stars or the moon or the sun
or whatever you insist on
comparing my countenance to.

Brilliant like the glitter on the edge of a blade.
You should know, at least, what a masochist I am.
©2004-2009 ~merytaten
:iconmerytaten:

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This is my armor against banality.

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:icongrayskies:
"or whatever you insist on
comparing my countenance to."

I think this needs to be reworked, "to" doesnt fit.

"Brilliant like the glitter on the edge of a blade.
You should know, at least, what a masochist I am. "

Oh my god, i am an love-masochist. I dont think that ive ever had a relationship without hurting myself in one way or the other.

"I pity you. You amuse me
not."

Angry?

Your friend,
Adam

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